[WRITING TASK 2] Bài mẫu 07 – Free education

All education (primary, secondary and further education) should be free to all people and paid and managed by the government.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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These days, it is true that the costs of education for children have been increasing significantly. Therefore, many people hold a belief that it is authorities that should be responsible for covering a part or all of the tuition fees. The merits and demerits of this standpoint have been debated upon and this essay will highlight the most important ones.

Several citizens side with the financial support for children education for some certain reasons. First and foremost, children nationwide would have an equal opportunity to access basic education, especially those from isolated areas or underprivileged families. Such proper education would probably equip them with adequate preparation for the adulthood, in the sense that they are likely to have decent jobs and stable income in the future. The next thing I would like to mention is that free-of-charge education among children is expected to reduce crime rates. It is commonly known that one of the main roots of offences is unemployment, which would be effectively alleviated by education.

Nevertheless, we could not turn a blind eye on the disadvantages of the subsidy on education services for children. There are, obviously, many other urgent sectors that bring immediate benefits for citizens such as healthcare, environment whereas education is supposed to yield fruitful results only in the long run. Furthermore, private sectors are expected to join hands as well. That solely goverments invest in education could in fact potentially slow down the process of education, while corporates could surely develop the curricular with their pratical experience and facilities with their and enormous financial power. It is true that most of the accredited academic institutes globally are not government-operated schools, but private or public ones.

In conclusion, it seems to me that we gain more than we lose from the policy of giving a part or complete financial support to children education.


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